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Sincerity’s breeze

14 September 2011 Poetry 4 Comments

inspired by a personal development course:

You might say it’s not action

To etch some more letters on a virtual page

But this is more than a pen pal correspondence

It’s both a cry for help and a declaration of independence

I can’t lie, I get emotional, I get psyched, and I fluctuate back and forth

I live somewhere between right and wrong

And I’m troubled by my righteous indignation

Yet here I am, and it’s who I am

I feel I have something to prove

And I just want that feeling removed

I could focus on the positive

Say it’s all about the future

Tell you I’ve moved on

But I’m on a treadmill of distraction and delusion

Increasing the speed until it demands

Yet here I am in a brief reprieve of not urgent and important

Fleeing towards the opportunity for fulfillment

Like someone awakening from the paramedic’s shocks

I know guilt, regret, and lament are needless weighing rocks

But age and comparisons can put you in a superficial box

I’ve gone further in five years, than the many years before

But I’m measuring a normal pace to one barely off the floor

I hear the calls that I must emotionally break from the past

I understand further pain will come if I don’t implement fast

So, I’m here before you testifying that I may still fall

I may sometimes drop the ball

But it is time to plant new seeds

With sincerity’s breeze

Remembering that it takes many tries

To grow fruitful trees

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  1. It is a superb suggestions specifically to people new to blogosphere, quick and exact information… Many thanks for sharing this a single. A ought to study post.

  2. Thanks for your feedback, glad you enjoyed the post.

  3. “Remembering that it takes many tries

    To grow fruitful trees”

    How true that is. I hope you benefit from the personal development course.

    btw: nice banner, ma sha Allah. I like the blue colour of Solemn Stream because it reminds me of water.

  4. I’m glad you could relate to the poem, and thanks for the well wishes.

    Yeah, I’m happier with the new banner as well.

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